Category: Poetry

DD Writers Jam Fest: Poetry edition

    I hope you enjoy this edition of the Docudharma Writers Jam fest, and please, feel free to contribute.

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For more detail on different styles of poetry, please go to poetryonline.com

   As my first contribution to this series, I thought it would be beneficial to all to start with a review of different styles of poetry with an example of each. This is a useful tool to show which styles there are and how you can use different styles to convey different emotions.

   I have written poetry since I was 16. I am now 29.

   My first writings were free style rap. I was influenced by Krs One and Rakim, as well as other early 90’s rappers like Jay-Z, Tupac and the Notorious Big. I was what you might call a wigger.

    Krs One, George Carlin and other influences were a strong in my early political and literary life.

    When my father died I dropped out of school and entered the workforce. To excersize my mind I would go to the public (socialist) library and devour books on all subjects, politics, economics, history, and the classics of prose and verse.

    After a year of experiencing the wage slavery of class war head on, I went back to high school. My first class of the day was Poetry. I feel in love and graduated as an honors student 2 years later.

    The problem with hip hop is that it is so highly structured, so fast and so short in phonetic flexibility that it is difficult to say much without being overly repetitive.

    Also, the english language simply lacks the rhymes. French, Italian, Spanish and Portuguese are romance languages that are full of rhymes, most words end in O or A, and the depth of communication is certainly more rich than the large and overtly technical English language we use in American discourse.

    As George Orwell wrote of poetry

“Did you know there are only 10 words in modern Newspeak that rhyme with Rod?”

   Therefore, Engliish clearly has it’s poetic limits. The point here, and what makes the works of Shakespear so brilliant, is how we can strcth those limits and expand the boundaries in order to make our language so much more vivid and Descriptive.

   We can create a world of words that goes beyond the limitations of the world around us.

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2009 Poems:  Dreamcatcher


Dream Catcher #3

Blooming Bliss

Bliss created

from stardust

memories

seeds coalesce

from strands

of time

and shed

their husks

creating space

to weave

the threads

in the tapestry

of existence

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–March 12, 2009

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2009 Poems:  Dreamcatcher


Dream Catcher #2

Snagging Wisps

Strands of stardust

woven spacetime

arranged to collect

better days

true emotions

radiant ideas

clasping truth

in the clutches

of abstraction

to be spilled

when bleeding

is necessary

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–March 11, 2009

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2009 Poems:  Dreamcatcher


Dream Catcher #1

Aspiration

Hopes and dreams

of a better future

might be captured

in designs which

simultaneously

register

the disappointment

of a second-rate

present

and the struggle

to escape

the entanglements

of a past

constructed

out of ignorance

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–March 10, 2009

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2009 Poems


Dividing Wall

Slip Sliding Away

Times…days

come and go

when you worry

about slipping

off your high perch

at the top of the cliff

you euphemistically

call a slope

that separates

you from us

I guess you worry

about ending up

where we are now

having to worry

about what we do

about having to climb

upward

to have a chance

to survive

to gain a handhold

on a place

in your society

hoping you don’t

stomp on our fingers

The slippery slope

is too often

a melting cliff

of ice

maybe carved

out of your hearts

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–July 17, 2009

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2009 Poems


Contact

Compare and Contrast

This space is vast

with room for all of us

to try to live

fulfill our dreams

yearn for love

pursue happiness

The difference

between us

is that some

hate the others

and it is not us

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–July 10, 2009

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2009 Poems


Ruby for Slippers

Parade

One step

at a time

one foot

in front of the other

ever forward

marching

for equality

here

for justice

now

for honor

of our heroes

for freedom

to be ourselves

Heads held high

we march in pride

for a better future

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–July 3, 2009

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2009 Poems


Illumination

Long Dark Tunnel

For years

we quivered

in our personal caves

until we found

our personal lights

our inner torches

that led us out

into a tunnel

still dark

so very murky

sinister warnings

slithering in the corners

warning us to go back

away from the danger

of being ourselves

Every so often

there has appeared

a brightness

in the distance

the dream of equality

for us to chased

only to see the light

extinguished

too rapidly

hopes dashed

at least for awhile

but we have kept pushing

forward

hoping the dreams

could avoid becoming

nightmares

Once more

lights shine

and we wonder

if this time

we will reach

the daylight

before our aspirations

burn

in a political

conflagration

not of our making

Will we ever be free?

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–June 26, 2009

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Cleaving

Double Meaning

Divided we fall

into the abyss

of darkness

hated

for being Other

our difference pitied

treated no better

than animals

We can allow

the axe of intolerance

to separate us

from the support

we need

or we can

cling to those

who will celebrate

with us

the meaning

of our lives

Cleave

has two meanings

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–Juneteenth, 2009

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Frontiers

Changelings

We twist and turn

in the winds

of a reality

not of our choosing

lepidopterans mounted

on twin boards

of sex

rather than free

to explore

the multiplicity

of gender

In denying

our freedom

you put limits

on your own

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–June 12, 2009

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Tears

Releasing Fear

One day the Girl

had had enough

She called the Fears together

and they all held hands

And they marched away

from Despondency

Pain was afraid of falling

Humiliation was afraid of failure

and looking foolish

Loss feared leaving behind

what they had

Loneliness feared being separated

Death feared the crocodiles

For an instant

the Girl lost her resolve

and the crocodiles appeared

and the fears wanted to turn

and run away

but the Girl screamed

and lightning struck

and the forest burned

as the Girl and the fears

crouched in the swamp

until the forest

was no more

The Girl led the Fears

to the edge of the swamp

and sent them on their way

And she walked

proudly forward

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–June 5, 2009

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Arranging the Pieces

Time Passing

Day by day

my hope

for a better world

wanes

as ignorance

dominates

the desire

for knowledge

of what

a better world

might mean

for such as me

I try to pick up

the pieces

of a useful life

and lay them

in a meaningful

pattern

for all to see

Too many

turn away

too often

–Robyn Elaine Serven

–May 29, 2009

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