Pony Party… Haiku Edition

I’m sure you already know…. don’t wRECk the pony party

So… (I recently learned from davidseth this is a jewish way to start a paragraph!)

Nightprowlkitty had a neat essay about haiku’s, or pops…. and since I had nothin’….

I thought I’d try to continue the puppy theme with my haiku effort.

(I want to warn you I’m pisspoor at poetry & don’t remember the rules of haiku!)

Your haiku’s can be about anything, of course… and you don’t have to haiku.

tumbling growling running

wet noses, sloppy kisses

Puppy pile up

fur-people friends

understand everything

yet never think worse of you

soft and good to burble on

rotund replete asleep

fat puppy belly


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    • RiaD on December 7, 2007 at 00:14

    I couldn’t figure out what to do…

    so I read an essay & found the answer!

  1. A pony party

    Hours seeking lovely content

    No comments at four

  2. Deep dark bark

    looking fierce

    with a clown soul


    soft brown eyes

    hesitant tail wag

    just stole the couch

  3. I am the blue screen of death

    No one hears your screams

    (I saw that years ago – hilarious if you or anyone you loved ever used Windows NT.)

  4. Tisk, tisk.

  5. she smiled and asked me

    can you draw like da Vinci

    will you sign my chest?

    i told her before

    we started – how to end it

    and end it she did

    my brother and i cast out

    reeling in that sad dog fish

    old man cut the line

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