Jan 23 2008

Poem: You Tell Me

Well this poem actually has a title.

It is inspired by the candidate diaries over at Daily Kos — no, not the diaries themselves or Daily Kos as a political weblog.  Just the people themselves, many of whom I do not know at all.

Anyway, here it is.

YOU TELL ME

by Nightprowlkitty

you tell me

with great passion

your blazing

radiant

visions

with sincerity

you tell me this

and it cannot

be denied

I believe you!

Your heart beats

no different

than my own.

you tell me

and so do

a million more

in rages

of enlightenment

worldwide

treasure hunt,

digging deep

to find

the common

root

The End.

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  1. … just saw buhdy’s essay on the same subject, but with a different angle.

    we’re so versatile here at docudharma …

    • Caneel on January 23, 2008 at 02:29
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    One must dance every day with wildness …

                                             (on reading “The Invitation”)

    in private

    or in public.

    Rapture must

    travel to tips

    of fingers

    and toes

    for full effect.

    Before or

    after meals.

    Warning:

    Headiness

    may ensue.

    🙂

    • OPOL on January 23, 2008 at 03:03
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    Loved Caneel’s post as well.

    Here’s one of mine…

    TANGERINE MOON

    Ancient musty secrets

    The forbidden knowledge of kings

    Jewels of insight–precious pearls of understanding

    Wisdom in its many paradoxical guises

    It is and

    It isn’t

    And it shall always be so

    Behold all you pilgrims

    The mystery and the magic

    Of the Tangerine Moon

    • Robyn on January 23, 2008 at 03:08
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    ,->

    • KrisC on January 23, 2008 at 03:52
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    at least there’s a pootie party on the rec list over there right now!

    I guess everyone is feeling just about the same…candidate wars can only last so long (gawd I hope)!

    kewl poem npk.

    just to get you in the mood:  Here’s Io!

    Photobucket

    • kj on January 23, 2008 at 17:22
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    when are you gonna recite these babies into your mic?

    now that i know what your voice sounds like, i want to hear you speak these last two poems.  ðŸ˜‰

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